Freitag, 29. Januar 2010


The police won't help you.
They won't even believe you.
Everyone's laughing at you.
So don't tell your story.
Don't trust anyone.
Keep quiet.
Be invisible.
Never look back.
When you hear their wings, it will be too late.


Diandra hat gesagt…

Sorry, the #FridayFlash pieces keep getting shorter! Moving house is due this weekend, so hopefully I'll have more time for entertaining/pestering you in the near future!

slommler hat gesagt…

Scary! It put me in mind of the new film coming out called Legion!! I won't look back...I can promise you that!

mazzz in Leeds hat gesagt…

I want to know more about the wings now!

Good luck with moving house, that's one of my least favourite activities!

Melissa hat gesagt…

Love the last line: "When you hear their wings, it will be too late." Intriguing. I want to know more, too! Good luck with moving. Ugh! I know what that's like!

Laura Eno hat gesagt…

It might have been short but it packed a punch! I'm another who wants to know more!

AJ Campos hat gesagt…

I immediately formed a picture of a girl running for her life and scared ****less through an alley. Nice work.

Michael Solender hat gesagt…

never look back. this is nicely paced - tense!