Sorry, the #FridayFlash pieces keep getting shorter! Moving house is due this weekend, so hopefully I'll have more time for entertaining/pestering you in the near future!
Scary! It put me in mind of the new film coming out called Legion!! I won't look back...I can promise you that!HugsSueAnn
I want to know more about the wings now!Good luck with moving house, that's one of my least favourite activities!
Love the last line: "When you hear their wings, it will be too late." Intriguing. I want to know more, too! Good luck with moving. Ugh! I know what that's like!
It might have been short but it packed a punch! I'm another who wants to know more!
I immediately formed a picture of a girl running for her life and scared ****less through an alley. Nice work.
never look back. this is nicely paced - tense!